Friday, March 30, 2007
Dont Be Fooled Comments
Rating: ★5.0
You look right through me,
As though im a pane of glass,
So transparent, you say
But don't be fooled.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
30 March 2007
Powerful written elocution, young lady...Well done, indeed...Structure is crisp & mellifluous as a penny tossed 'cross an icepond....Liked your metaphoric opening. Solid crafting, Chelsea..Looking forward to visiting your work again. ~ F.j.c.R. ~
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7/26/2025 5:30:17 AM # 1.0.0
There is nothing at all 'transparent' about this piece... it's certainly worthy of a good hard look. Well done, Chelsea! ! Brian