Thursday, June 11, 2009

Dont Ask Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

I was hungry, so we stopped and ate
at some rinky-dink diner that was open late
the jukebox was playing one of my favorite songs
from singer, newton-john
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krissi b'williams
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

dont ask me, and i shall tell you no lies

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Teresa Babson 29 September 2009

it very familar to just shrug off answers we dont want to give..very comical poem..i like that

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Lady Grace 18 June 2009

your prose is nice..the setting is also in nice place..grace

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yelled out...'ask me no questions...and i will tell you no lies' i will not tell u lies. what a beautiful representatin.....10

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Allan Macli Borges 13 June 2009

wow, it's really long... but very funny too. well writen krissi, it's llike a short storie... i like it so much.

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Kevin Fisher 12 June 2009

haha its really long and took awhile to read but it was worth it I loved it kinda wanna beat the guy who this was about but it was interesting

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