Friday, June 22, 2007

Donot Loosen The Grip Comments

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do not loosen the grip,
for tomorrow i may need you most.

as strangers we met,
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samyak jain
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Vidi Writes 10 April 2008

My Goodnees god How Come and How Come We writers write In one or the other way About Grip and Clasp! ! Is that we feel so loose That we fear of flying To a farway land And then write a poem 'Ohhh I am Lonely' Coming to this poem.. Hummm.. YUMMY..... it is... I am in search of that Caesalpinea tree! !

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Shivapriya Surve 16 July 2007

'Negotiating the unseasonal downpour' really wowed me! Another great poem!

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Leonard Daranjo 02 July 2007

Another fine piece Aasiq. Keep going man.

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