Friday, December 28, 2007

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I cannot stay, I cannot go,
And where I am but you would know,
I walk where feet have walked before
But your feet linger at the shore.
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David Lewis Paget
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Heather Adams 12 June 2008

I have always loved your work and follow with great interest and read between the lines. Very clever with your choice of description And all I have........each frame. I can relate to this poem quite well as my husband involved himself with an Asian lady and so the past not letting you go is complicated as with my man and no doubt your wife who like me feels your pain. This has helped me to decide to move on. Thanks again for a great read Blue Heather

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unknown Viper 29 December 2007

this poem captures my heart...it reminds me of the opera 'madame butterfly'. i could feel and sense the images and the ocean comes alive.thanks...well

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Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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