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Now I’ve really done it.
I’ve flayed myself open like roast poultry
For all to see,
With not even the wishbone left for my efforts.
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This is just excellent, Lori. The images are really shocking...flaying yourself open like roast poetry...very good. Raynette
This is so good. Looks like a you forgot an article or two, but hey, real good is real good, even with a nit or two. Nice poem.
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7/25/2025 6:04:10 PM # 1.0.0
raw images, strong imagination, powerful ending! this a great poem! HBH