Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Done Being. Comments

Rating: ★3.5

Hearing it so close yet so far away,
Maybe it will continue to disappear further, day after day?

Seeing no more what the eyes really want to see,
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Jodie Louise Pollock
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Sranisha Francis 24 September 2015

very good words small words Hearing, seeing, feeling, smelling, tasting, all with ing, doing, Present? No. Past, with the ed's, the no mores, and the done being.

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Yassar Ali 09 June 2009

Another fine write x keep up the great work

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