Sunday, August 24, 2008

Don'T Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't take this path of confusion and wondering,

It may lead you to no more than a broken heart to see what his eyes have seen,
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Lydie Mathers
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Kesav Easwaran 28 August 2008

'Don't take this path of pain'...brilliant confident ending...both to poem and woes... soft lines hard, though sad to read the way the feel inside the mind comes out is good...poetic...10 i give

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 August 2008

I don't normally give tens but in this case I had no choice. The writing was wonderful and clearly stated with a clear meaning and rhythm as well. GW62

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 August 2008

amazing expressions.......thanks

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Pied Piper Berry 25 August 2008

awsome writing and well penned

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Lydie Mathers

Lydie Mathers

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