Don't take this path of confusion and wondering,
It may lead you to no more than a broken heart to see what his eyes have seen,
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I don't normally give tens but in this case I had no choice. The writing was wonderful and clearly stated with a clear meaning and rhythm as well. GW62
'Don't take this path of pain'...brilliant confident ending...both to poem and woes... soft lines hard, though sad to read the way the feel inside the mind comes out is good...poetic...10 i give