Saturday, October 3, 2009

(((Don'T You Know? ?))) Comments

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Don't YOU know what YOU All are doin'?

Havn't YOU any care in YOU at all?
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 03 October 2009

Patricia, you also understood this. There is a lot of suspence. This write was written from personal experience. I have been and am at times being stalked. Am a staunch victims rights advocate. Thank you for reading and commenting, Blessings, Theo

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Theodora Onken 03 October 2009

Catrina, you got it...nailed it. That is what it is about! Thank You. Blessings, Theo

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Patti Masterman 03 October 2009

I like this; we are being stalked but we just go on like everything's normal business-as-usual. I love the atmosphere of suspense.

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Catrina Heart 03 October 2009

This piece makes your readers contemplate about themselves........skeletons on the cabinet, ghost within which is our conscience that shadows us..........Great poem dear! ! !

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Theodora (Theo) Onken

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