Saturday, September 20, 2008

Don'T You Know Comments

Rating: 4.1

Don't you know,
this silence is like fire
slowly peeling layers
off my soul,
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Viola Grey
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*Trusting You* 12 June 2009

Don't you know, this silence is like fire oh that is so true. good job V. Becca

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Tom Balch 28 September 2008

shudder, slip and fade away, not good for love, 10 from Tom

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Emancipation Planz 28 September 2008

I hope you know Viola you fused this one hook, line, catcher-on and skinner.. 0800 Space 4 Grafting

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Saint Cynosure 21 September 2008

This is so good that I had to read it again and again and again...

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Kris Smith 21 September 2008

Beautiful write my friend you have pored your heart over the screen for all of us to read and what a beautiful heart it is Chris 10

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absence perhaps is the most perseverant and pervasive presence There's one reason the air thins without you now, but I can't quite catch it aroha, r

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