Don't you just hate it when you lose control?
You try so hard to keep your mouth shut
Then some idiot pushes you over the edge -
And your mouth runs away with you?
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Yeah, in the calm and clear headed moments we know what's right, but some people, some situations make it difficult to keep the lid on it! Well controlled writing though. Tempo and aggression building steadily. xx
lol.....you don't give onlike kicks do ya? ..hehe I just know that feeling^^ Preets
Ah Linda, the trials and tribulations of the old Ego. I know what you mean. Great poem. Simple and tight. Warmly, Alison
As long as it's not me your kicking! Cool poem, Linda... well done! ! Brian
LINDA...REMIND ME NEVER TO CROSS YOU...WELL PROSE -STYLED WRITE TIGHT, CRISP & SMOOTH FLOWING THROUGHOUT...GOOD WORK '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
I tend to be a bit verbose at times....