Thursday, June 8, 2006

Don'T You Just Hate It? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't you just hate it when you lose control?
You try so hard to keep your mouth shut
Then some idiot pushes you over the edge -
And your mouth runs away with you?
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Linda Ori
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Ted Sheridan 09 February 2008

I tend to be a bit verbose at times....

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Not a member No 4 27 January 2007

Yeah, in the calm and clear headed moments we know what's right, but some people, some situations make it difficult to keep the lid on it! Well controlled writing though. Tempo and aggression building steadily. xx

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Preeti - is here! 11 July 2006

lol.....you don't give onlike kicks do ya? ..hehe I just know that feeling^^ Preets

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Jerry Hughes 22 June 2006

That's telling them, in spades. Good one Linda...

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Alison Cassidy 22 June 2006

Ah Linda, the trials and tribulations of the old Ego. I know what you mean. Great poem. Simple and tight. Warmly, Alison

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Brian Dorn 21 June 2006

As long as it's not me your kicking! Cool poem, Linda... well done! ! Brian

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LINDA...REMIND ME NEVER TO CROSS YOU...WELL PROSE -STYLED WRITE TIGHT, CRISP & SMOOTH FLOWING THROUGHOUT...GOOD WORK '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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