Monday, March 21, 2016

Don't You Comments

Rating: 3.5

Your vail of regal moonlight
How I adore you
Eyes see her in the garden
Spiritual erotic balance
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Joseph Narusiewicz
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Kay Staley 22 March 2016

WOW! ! Thrilling! I usually dont look this strange type of poem that seems to have no rhythm, but the language in this poem captivates enough for me to like it. How great the phrases and words are so articulately put together. Definitely a success. It is like stream of consciousness with very provoking language. Good job.

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Joseph Narusiewicz

Joseph Narusiewicz

So St Paul, Minnesota
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