Don'T Whisper To The Night Comments

oops! .............again

Oops. :) Bri Already read this one.

hmm? fairy fey from Urban Dictionary online: Fay Another word for a fairy (faerie, fairie, faery) . The fay (fey, fae) also include elves, sprites, pixies, brownies, mermaids, dryads, imps, nymphs, and other small mythical creatures. and: Fey - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fey Wikipedia Fey means doomed, or fated to die. Fey may also refer to: Fèy, a traditional vodou folk song in Haïti.... Fey (album) , a recording by the singer of the same name. WHO KNEW! ? “chest fell tight” OR “felt tight”? well, you would know better than I, as it is YOUR chest! treasure chest? ? ? “Or do wish it was still day? ' “ ……….. Darla, if you were a Pakistani (no disrespect to Pakistanis of course) and wrote it this way I would say “fine! ”, but wouldn’t you want to put in a “you”? I do! :) “Swirling and twirling from under the tree Swarms of lights came fluttering towards me What I thought were fireflies were now new Small curves, tiny dresses and nice legs too” ……....................................................................................................….. send photos, please; I want to see those fairy curves (and legs): they ARE female, aren’t they? ? great stanza! “That was until I saw their mouths opened wide And revealed pearly rows of sharp teeth inside” …..OK! ! ! ! now to have some BLOOD, as you ……………………………………………………………………………..“promised”! “…..watch the red marks grow” this is intense and making me tense and you have the wrong tense! at least it was interesting and relatively quick! I mean your DEATH! ! ! what a treat…. for fairies AND readers. GREAT RHYMING. TO MyPoemList indeed! thanks Darlene aka Darla bri :)

WOW' Darla... a lovely fascinating write, I felt as if I am in a theater hall being engrossed with the rapid changes from one scene to other which were very neatly framed with your amazing imagination..... a 10 from my side

Woah this began in a magical wistful way then to fireflies and then imagination took a sharp turn into glowing fairies and then took a surprise dark turn to villainous fairy characters. Fascinating! Kudos for the rhyme scheme. Nice to read u again.