Come and fall away from such a state of a semi-coma.
Avoid her screen-ager antics and sunspots of melanoma.
Between the line, see the dark-shines of Jezebel's take.
I pray you voice your valued plug-in for Heaven's sake.
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A very poweful poem. I'll not comment on any specific phrase. It is so overwhelming and full of life. I especially like the Physics-al/Sensual play of ideas. You are quite a talent. This poem deserves an essay. Hope you'll post one. Worthy of many rereadings. I'll be back... but I doubt I'll ever understand it all. I'm stunned by its complexity.