Saturday, September 22, 2012

Don't Walk Away Comments

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Don't walk away from me,
I need you right now
I'm struggling,
Can't cope and need to know how
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Lyn Paul
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Jak Black 10 January 2016

A good poem, Lyn. Really enjoyed reading this. We all need a purpose in life. Someone, something. Well done.

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Heather Wilkins 03 June 2013

Stand tall, be proud look for tomorrow. God made us who we each are,

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Mark Dillon 03 October 2012

So well written Lyn and so true, so many out there who just can't find their way or just got lost spiritually and mentally, it's hard out there.

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Sina Farajzadeh 23 September 2012

Good job dear. I hear such voice. But I don't call it evil voice, I don't even call it angelic voice. I don't know what to call it. I exist and guess it's not the life that I dreamt to live. I am nothing, but I AM! Good luck dear.

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Louis Rams 23 September 2012

don't ever walk away or give up hope, just stay strong and learn to cope. good write! love it

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