Monday, October 5, 2015

Don’t Wait, Jump On The Smaller One Now. Comments

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Wind is gushing through the window,
Change is inevitable now.

Light is peeping from the roof ventilator,
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 05 October 2015

Those who learned and know how to enjoy smaller things they are happy and living peacefully. Message is very clear Pounce on small things and enjoy happiness. Liked it, God Bless you.

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Rajnish Manga 05 October 2015

The message is clear for everybody to grasp. Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem which emphatically lays down the rule: Small things around us carry enough happiness Yet we crush them for want of bigger happiness.

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M Asim Nehal 07 October 2015

Thanks much Sir

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Sanjukta Nag 05 October 2015

I'm out of adjective again. imagery touched the heart and made it speechless. loved the last line and the whispering of faith.

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M Asim Nehal 07 October 2015

Thanks much SN....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2015

Nature is trying to interacting with soul so amazingly with imagery here. Wind is gushing through the window, Change is inevitable now. Light lights life definitely in such wonderful feeling of deep philosophical poem. Wise sharing...10

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2015

Thank u so much, Sir.

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