Friday, July 27, 2012

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He dumped you and left you torpsy-turvy on the ground.
But I will pick you up like a diamond soaked in mud.
My love shall rain upon your traculant state,
My noble heart shall gently touch yours in tatters;
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Peter Daniel Phiri
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John Brown 02 October 2012

A touching and interesting poem Peter. Nicely written.

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Kasia Fedyk 28 July 2012

Very beautiful Peter with a profound meaning, finding incredible beauty in all around, healing with love nourishing with care, this is what I feel your fantastic poem.

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