Friday, November 11, 2011
Don'T Use All Of Me Comments
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capture my interest, but don't hold it captive
exercise my freedom, but don't make me too active
entertain my fantasy, but don't charge me a fee
jog my memory, but don't let my harness go free
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John Raubenheimer
14 November 2011
There is a spring in each line of this, from its first idea to the next. And each line repeats that thrill. I also like the self-assertion in this poem.
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7/27/2025 1:51:37 AM # 1.0.0
What a great poem! Stimulation of the brain. Very important...