Wednesday, November 2, 2005
Don'T Turn To Me Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Don't turn to me,
When all else fails,
And when the music stops,
Don't turn to me,
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Holly Heron
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7/22/2025 11:08:20 PM # 1.0.0
Your work has quality, though it is somewhat statement-orientated. Much tell, not enough show But it does have promise... and if you are only 14 as per your age above (I can't believe that you are, to be honest, the writing seems far too advanced) - an astonishing future lies ahead... smile. S.