Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Don'T Tell Me... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will I be the next one they look at
lying cold as ice, pasty-not white
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Shelley L Baxter
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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 May 2008

yet the icy draft of delusion semingly morbid by the feelings as inflicts upon the mind the vale of tunes rocked up when dismayed................disapproving by thought, but uniquely wrought by the poetics, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Dee Daffodil 09 April 2007

Shelley...Ahhh yes...the big question....who should die first...and who should be left behind. Fact of the matter is that what will happen, will happen. Nicely written...difficult subject to delve into! Hugs, Dee

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Melvina Germain 30 March 2007

I feel you were in a very dark place for a time Shelley, thinking of all the sadness that happened at some time in your life, be it past or present. Possibly thinking of loved one's that have already moved on or loved ones that may soon move on. I love this poem very much, I certainly can relate to this. Excellent writing my friend, keep up the good work. A big (10) from me.---Melvina---

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Shelley L Baxter

Shelley L Baxter

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