You didn't appreciate her presence, You called her your love,
She supposed, it as the purest love.
But it was masked...conditioned...as per mood love.
When you were broken,
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Thankyou so much Sir 😊 @Kumarmani Mahakul.... This is a girls psychology that speaks when she is being taken for granted... It makes her think as if she can't be enough to be accepted even though being honest and pure in her love and care.
A beloved often can't know whether her lover's love is pure or not. Though the girl (beloved) is full of beauty and charm yet lover thinks her full of flaws. It makes the beloved dissatisfied and gradually she leaves him. This theme has been astutely and startlingly painted by you, dear Sona. A beautiful poem shared.10
Sounds like you again. A Kashmir girl. So, who is the Master of disguise?
You have eloquently expressed your points of view, in a poem easy to understand. 'You will miss your punching bag' - well chosen words!
Thankyou so much Sir 😊