Don't Stir My Calm Water Comments

Made a re today. Enjoyed reading this beautiful once again

Strongly worded cautioning attitude.

Great courage and right metaphors.100.

A well constructed poem from a firm mind. I pity the person this poem is aimed at.

A very powerful and thoughtful poem! .. Caring for your boundaries and protecting yourself! .. A very wise and excellent poem! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

True honest words from an honest heart, it be so! Presented brilliantly and powerful words! 5 Stars!

The wild beasts of woods always follow this principle: don't bother me, or else...because unless provoked or threatened, they generally do not attack. Some (we bipeds) do not follow this, they disturb your peace for no reason. For them such warning is very much needed. A warning well-worded.

Fantastic poem. Lovely flow......thank u. anjandev roy.

We all know that words can either heal or mar. Some people are so callous and careless in using words and they never care how much their words would hurt others. Such people have to be sternly dealt with. An apt tirade for all those who deserve it. Here very suggestive images are used in powerful and logical succession! A 10

A Keep your harsh words In your mind Tame your mouth Otherwise the hornets Will hush you forever. A stern warning to someone who has severely wounded the poet! The words here assume the sharpness of a cudgel. Apt images are used in logical succession.

Keep your harsh words In your mind Tame your mouth Otherwise the hornets Will hush you forever. I tell you Don't stir my calm water You will be sorry If you do......loved these lines. A beautiful poem with haunting expression.

Don't stir my calm water There is an active volcano Ready to erupt Inside of me......sparkling poetic expression dear Rose! An excellent piece of work!

Here I mean peaceful mind is calm water and when it is stired or disturbed it creates eruption. It is really a brilliant write on metaphorical base having stunning expression. Thanks for sharing.10

We are warned. A great write.+++10

I tell you Don't stir my calm water You will be sorry If you do. This one is very different from what you mostly write. A fiery side of yours. Magnificent. A huge 10.

Just like a river. It is so deep when water is calm. Great expression...nice poem♥

We can feel the strength and determination in your words. Your valiant fearlessness and conviction. Thus speak the righteous. So well phrased and composed. A very well crafted and convincing work.

Positiveness! ! To tame your mouth in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The poem indicates great strength. Anger is like a strong alcoholic drink. Too much of it you end up not knowing what you are doing, or have done, and lose all control. At that point it is best to walk away.....10

Keep your harsh words In your mind Tame your mouth Otherwise the hornets Will hush you forever........sparkling expression! Your poem 'Don't Stir My Calm Water' touches the bottom is a commendable piece of poetry! Thanks for sharing................10