Sunday, August 16, 2009

Don'T Speak To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are leaving me, so
Don't speak to me
Anymore and just walk out the door
Just leave and please don't look back
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2009

can't stand this when we fight This just too much to handle I just want to be myself again So please just go Don't speak to me...good flare up and finely woven in words.. i loved it.....10 read mine.. anywhere.. no separate ways... divorce

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

Is this momentary reaction or permanent decision? Liking and disliking just like that may not be love and loving. But the emotion is expressed unambiguously.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

your emotion have been placed in the poem..... nice

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Surya . 27 August 2009

oh! take it easy. he will come back to you for a plesant days ahead. nice poem, nice read. voted10 siurya

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Shilesha Johnson 25 August 2009

And leave and please Don't look back Because I don't want To remember what You look like i love that part. especially the 'i don't want to remember what you look like' part... when people hurt us or leave, it seems that forgetting and walking away is the best thing to do. the worst part is that even though that may be true, the pain is un bearable.. i can identify with the poem and i just loved it so much.. great write..10+

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