Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Don'T Smell The Roses Comments

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My nose is not with me
even as I felt for it
on my face, it is not there
yet I see the gore putrefying
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Eddie Roa
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Angelica Dela Cruz 13 July 2009

i think this is very true. if we couldn't smell each other, then probably we'd all be nicer to each other. or at least we wouldn't overreact whenever someone farted.: D very good poem!

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 July 2009

very clever!

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Louis Rams 01 July 2009

the beauty of the senses is that we have them, and it's a gift to be treasured, such as your words are to be treasured.

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Chitra - 01 July 2009

an intuitive write on the senses..well done

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Catrina Heart 30 June 2009

Nice one for the come back sir ED............lovely!

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So true Eddie. My husband doesn't have a good sense of smell, and I often say to him he is lucky to smell certain things that are not at all nice. Great concept and title and great writing too! 10 Karin Anderson

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Carol Gall 29 June 2009

welcome back eddie i agree life is nicer without a nose

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comatose 28 June 2009

hmm...good

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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