Wednesday, August 31, 2011

! ! ! Don'T Say Goodbye! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.3

Why? Why did you say goodbye?
I thought you loved me;
I guess I was wrong.
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Chrishtiana Reed
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Nikunj Sharma 29 March 2012

Emotion, longing and the zeal. This poem has it all.

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Deep Mukherjee 31 January 2012

it's really beautiful considering your age....enjoyed it :)

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Lexie Bousman 06 January 2012

sad, it sucks to be heartbroken

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Chidori Storm 29 December 2011

This poem is really beautiful. The man who hurt and left you has no clue what he has lost. You are a really talented poet. Your poems really speak to me. I can connect to them so much.

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Cosmic Dreamer 10 November 2011

Love is all conquering... Love is all nourishing... Love is a deeper pain than any man can imagine... This is what your poem said to me... Brilliant poem...

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1. no matter what Jesus always love you.2. If without someone's love you'd die, then you're putting that person in the position of a 'god' not a lover and that's extremely bad. The poem however shows ur desperation for their love. Love is a two way street, if they left it was never love. check ur spellings always.

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Preston Simmons 30 October 2011

I love the line: 'I want to hear your voice, I want to see your smile, I just want to be in your arms for a while.' This flows very well together and adds a great description to the poem. I love the message of everlasting love. It is something that everyone is seeking.

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Bella Hernandez 30 October 2011

Beautiful poem! shows what many young girls go through for this thing called 'Love' ~Bella

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A Lifetime Of Fame 30 October 2011

I really love this poem, because it shows something that I know all too much.

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Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Beauty radiates through this well penned write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and God Bless You, Chrishtiana! Keep giving the World more of your brilliant and talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Uche Chidozie 29 September 2011

thanks for sharing, nice job

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Stefanie Fontker 19 September 2011

Very interesting poetry. I like the emotion here, and the passion. Beautiful writing.

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i love your poem but girl its not the end of the world you will find some one to love you you just gotta keep your head up

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Raj Jadhav 06 September 2011

Very emotional jst touched my heart truly amazing words seem 2 b less

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