Why? Why did you say goodbye?
I thought you loved me;
I guess I was wrong.
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it's really beautiful considering your age....enjoyed it :)
This poem is really beautiful. The man who hurt and left you has no clue what he has lost. You are a really talented poet. Your poems really speak to me. I can connect to them so much.
Love is all conquering... Love is all nourishing... Love is a deeper pain than any man can imagine... This is what your poem said to me... Brilliant poem...
1. no matter what Jesus always love you.2. If without someone's love you'd die, then you're putting that person in the position of a 'god' not a lover and that's extremely bad. The poem however shows ur desperation for their love. Love is a two way street, if they left it was never love. check ur spellings always.
I love the line: 'I want to hear your voice, I want to see your smile, I just want to be in your arms for a while.' This flows very well together and adds a great description to the poem. I love the message of everlasting love. It is something that everyone is seeking.
Beautiful poem! shows what many young girls go through for this thing called 'Love' ~Bella
I really love this poem, because it shows something that I know all too much.
Beauty radiates through this well penned write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and God Bless You, Chrishtiana! Keep giving the World more of your brilliant and talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
Very interesting poetry. I like the emotion here, and the passion. Beautiful writing.
i love your poem but girl its not the end of the world you will find some one to love you you just gotta keep your head up
Very emotional jst touched my heart truly amazing words seem 2 b less
Emotion, longing and the zeal. This poem has it all.