Don'T Say Good Bye Comments

Good by always leaves one in a position of distress. Hold on.

well written crystal, very touching and in a very simple way you have brought out the emotions. Wish you Good Luck.. :)

It wasn't meant to be taken literal.

============================= secret pace or place? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Don't tell me when you're gone, for if you do everything will be wrong.”………………………………………………………………………………………………… ….. how can a dead person tell you anything? these lines sound a bit awkward to me, but I understand at least. gone/wrong ……..this is a good effort at making a rhyme, but sometimes I would rather have a poet not try to make a rhyme IF the words which make up the resulting rhyme do not convey this is ok. Whatever you do, don't leave. Please oh please don't leave. My heart would break for you. I will miss you! Please don't say good bye. Never say good bye.” I sometimes don’t like when a word is repeated at the ends of different lines e.g. leave/leave you/you good bye/ good bye …………………but I think it IS APPROPRIATE HERE. nice. bri :)