Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Don'T Say.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes in the darkness I can still see your face, smell you.
Feel the way your lips felt the last time we touched.
Don't say it didn't matter, it was just one of those things
Don't say you didn't fall again
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Louise JeanMarie
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Tear Of An Angel S.R.B.W. 15 August 2009

very nicely written and full of emotions...even the unspoken ones.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 13 August 2009

Very truthful, seductive and sensual.

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Ian Bowen 12 August 2009

Louise, I believe you have a great deal to learn about men. I do think however, you wrote a very honest poem. Regards, Ian

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HaZeM PaKKaR 12 August 2009

i will say one word: '' A S T O N I S H I N G ''

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