A kind, yet depressed man,
So kind, so sincere, and honest.
Such a man deserves happiness,
Yet hollowness and sadness is all that is felt.
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Your poem shows a very kind and sympathetic heart. These lines show a poet's insight into another person's feelings, 'Yet hollowness and sadness is all that is felt. Someone who left his life, Someone who meant so much to him; Turned away from him and walked away' I'm always amazed when I read your poems
This is a heart warming poem. It seems you are the tiniest bird here, having the broadest heart and the sweetest melody. I hope the poet to whom this poem is anonymously addressed, will feel inspired and motivated to look for new meanings of life. An excellent poem with a very apt title.10/10 from me. Well done, little star!
How kind and thoughtful you are, ! Your lovely poem demonstrates this, by far.
A fine motivational poem. U r a young poetess with a heart of gold to write in sympathy.
C.J. i could repeat some of the glowing compliments you received in the earlier comments, but i'll just say well done. thanks for sharing. bri :) i'll send it to MyPoemList. p.s. of course i have to write more! Or this is so I interpret. ..........i'm not sure if the english is proper, but i like this line a lot, mostly because you admit that you are making an interpretation. Leave these sad memories behind, Find someone else, perhaps. Make each day meaningful; Enjoy the wonders of this world. these are GREAT suggestions. of course they are easier suggested than accomplished.