Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Don'T Read This. Comments

Rating: 4.8

So you did, just like when your mam said
Don’t go near the fire you’ll get burnt
Said there’s a ghost in the cellar but wernt
Don’t speak with your mouthful but you often do
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Wojja Fink
COMMENTS
Frank Lambert 15 August 2009

Lol, I bet you can tell a lot about your readers by who reads this one first! Nice write. Frank

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

i smiled as i read the title so i go inside....nicely done..a beautiful poem..grace

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Lu-Lu Martin 24 April 2009

Amusing write. Good leading intro with the title... :)

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Subroto Chatterjee 21 April 2009

This reads like a regular whodunnit. You must have been a very naughty but an enterprising child...(are still?) . And talk about curiousity and what it did to the cats...! Cheers. Subroto

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 01 April 2009

I was not intending to, read this I mean, but being April Fools day the PC played a trick on me and here I am....now grinning like a cheshire I am, the cat variety...now you can see why the PC has control over me....You never disappoint -Brilliant, Cindy

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Donall Dempsey 01 April 2009

I was just eating my crusts when this poem forced itself upon me and wouldn't take no for an answer...so yeah I read it and now I'm glad I did 'cos of the smile nailed to my face - a real gotcha! love Dónall

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that's is brilliant....i love it. i wish i thought of it first which is the key to great poems.. wow =] x x

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