Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Don'T Put Blame On Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

Neither on my tender heart
It's your baritone voice
That played the staple part.

It came like an age old hymn
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Neela Nath Das
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 April 2022

Loved the candid expression. Truthfully put.

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Heather Wilkins 23 August 2013

eight letters of emotion three key words thus unlocked me set me free in the sky like a sea hawk I am flying high so nice a thought

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Valerie Dohren 21 August 2013

Those three words are precious when they are sincere, sadly it is often not the case. Lovely poem Hari.

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Aswath Raman 21 August 2013

Excellent write sir! And I suppose the three words which made you fly sky high is I Love You! Simple but highly effective way of conveying emotions!

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Unwritten Soul 20 August 2013

WOW this is excellent, beautiful_Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 August 2013

Hari..May God bless you...Baritone is an angelic but I love you is a land where wings sprout fly high and high nice poem nice to read and enjoy

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