Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Don'T Push Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't you dare try
To push me to my limit
Coz' I can make you cry
Even though I don't mean it
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Julia Pascual 30 July 2009

this is a scary poem.. haha.. chillax dude, we're here.. we'll help you kill them.. LOL..XD

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Nashy Lamen 26 July 2009

The last too lines were so strong.. Very nicely expressed... The anger... Try to relax... To stress yourself too much..

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Danzen D. 24 July 2009

Venom and fire glaring from the words...One that possesses the ability to consume and turn the target to ashes..with nothing. A warning that will certainly insure a caution to be followed and implied. A perfect applause and keep on writing!

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