Don'T Pretend Being Happy Just Smile Comments

Sometimes people put a mask on so that you don't see their real faces. Deep inside they could be experiencing something painful. Happiness depends on what you have or the feeling for the moment. True joy comes from deep within. Keep in smiling anyhow! Lovely.

Pretty, 'life is a group of colours so be patient'. Yes I like it, things will get better if only you wait.

The sweep of imagination as also presentation are very nice. I like the poem.

A nice job! Well done!

i like this poem.. it has a good amount of imagery. :) its a great poem

i liked this poem. it made me think about the future and how no matter how bad it seems now, there is always tomorrow.

Yet another beautiful poem! It words are so true. It tells about how life can be so harsh, yet there is always good somewhere. I think everyone has felt like this sometime before, and you put it into words flawlessly and beautifully (: I also love how it

I loved it <3 <3 <3 beautiful and very very true

yes we should be happy n keep smiling, thanks 4 sharing

Way too good..well done

Gift yourself a smile...as the song says...'don't worry, be happy'. Smile with everyone, even if your mind is troubled. It costs you nothing. A good write.

nicely written you really have a talent in writing poems. so glad to take my time to read it it was worth all the time that was needed keep it up your doing great! ! your friend Bella

i love it its very good

Thx Raven a lot :) and yeah It's a personal poem, about me, but of course the last stanza didn't happen :)

i like this poem alot.. is it about you or is it just something you wrote... anyways i just love it.

The Smile just precious weapon to use...Like this poem very much it really has a brightening soul sensation, you end it very well and sharp..i like the last stanza, it such a beautiful write :) _Unwritten Soul