Don'T Press 'Talk' Jack! ! ! Comments

I'm Still afraid of pain... Wow... What a powerful end to a brilliant poem! ! ! Keep on writing! ! Let the world hear your pain, your fears and evidently the wisdom you gain from such experiences. God Bless, Rachel

this poem is well, for lack of a better word, intense. Leaves the reader wanting to know what happens next...great write, enjoyed it very much, , , Always, Amberlee

'the phone like a 9-inch knife'-I think even Tony Miller might like that!

Stop being a cowardy custard Jack, a romantic such as you should be able to talk your way back into her heart.10 from encouraging Tai