Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Don'T Mix Drinking And Driving. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I went to a party Mom,
I remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom,
So I drank soda instead.
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rakesh rampariya
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

Amazing poetry O Dear Poet…you’ve vividly narrated the dying person’s…feeling in traffic accident…heart breaking….moved my emotion… Finally it can be said ‘If you drink Don’t drive If you must drink Stay far from car.’ ~ niv 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Lady Grace 21 February 2010

i wish you mom says''i love you son, you will be alive coz GOD knows ur a behave and a good man''.............am so proud of the author for he put a beautiful words for this theme....an advice...don't drink while driving and when drunk don't drive...so nice the poem, , , so nice to read..i like this...to the author, am so proud of you, promise...smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...

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