Don'T Mind I Am Going To Be With You. Comments
In that night I will walk with you to the light.
In that mountain I will climb with you to the plain.
In that journey I will travel with you to destine.
In that party I will dance with you through the end.
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AWW this poem is really nice. Really deep. Loving words you have there. I like this poem and last man standing. Keep it up x
I'm sorry I'll be a little bit critical. i'll start by saying nice flow, rhythm, simple diction, but firstly, the title looks too loose and grammatical incompetence not minding the poetic license at hand. nevertheless, keep it up.
Outburst of the heart! A very touching love's confession that is well penned and poignant! 10+++ You definitely got what it takes to make it to the top of the Poetry World one day: TALENT! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
hope that special person knows how you feel, a beautiful piece of art
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7/20/2025 4:46:23 AM # 1.0.0
Real sweet. Deep poem you got there. Just watch the spelling abit more but your flow is on point Love this one and last man standing Keep it up x