Don'T Make It Last, Don'T Dwell On It (Thought) Comments

I see what I will call Punchlines here. This is gud and mature too. Kudos...Keep it up and Keep writting.

There's lots of great maturity here, I like how its infused with hope and it does not end in despair. Your words and imagery are beautiful especially these lines You drench the past in gasoline, the match lit and you know what to do Magnificent