Wednesday, September 28, 2016

Don't Look Too Closely Comments

Rating: 5.0

Go on...take my hand
Take it...like this...
Now pull yourself up
Pull yourself together...
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MaryLisa Russo
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Richard Wlodarski 06 February 2017

Another great one, Mary Lisa. Emotionally charged. Beautiful imagery. Especially like the last line.

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Julie Smith 02 October 2016

Amazing brings great pictures to the mind, thanks for sharing :)

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Mary-lisa Russo 09 October 2016

Awe thanks, Julie!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2016

Thrilling expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Mary-lisa Russo 30 September 2016

Thank you Kumarmani. Glad you enjoyed!

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