Don't Look For Fleas On Me Comments

Poet's life is not at all easy. Nobody seems to need his poetry. For some people he is cheesy - An ape fallen from a tree. Excellent beginning, very nicely written poem. do not want anyone's pity, I must do something on this earth. It has to be something pretty And something that really has worth. Sums up writers/poets/artists although this can be applied to anyone. Very well done.

(cont.) 2 - Your fleas have fled; after they bit, you bled. Now after all's been said, you're still alive, , , , but half dead. to MyPoemList. bri :)

1- " I realized: all women are, Sitting like worms in their niches." i wish I'D said that. why didn't my mom warn me? ? ? " Or put the rope around my neck. But it's hard to sing with a noose." though " noose" is not the best rhyme for " lose" , it is not bad. and i like the neck/noose alliteration. (cont.)

Thank you very much, dear Mahtab. It's very nice of you. I'm glad you liked it.

impressive statement- I do not want anyone's pity, I must do something on this earth. It has to be something pretty And something that really has worth. /// like and love it

Thanks to Brian Edwards and his comments and edits my new poem is here on PH. Paraphrasing William Shakespeare poets often face extremes " to write or not to write? ! "