Sunday, April 20, 2008

Don'T Look Back Comments

Rating: 5.0

As i placed my foot upon the train
i looked back an saw my mothers pain
i can't go back I've come this far
i'm a sailor now! a jolly jack tar!
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Bob Gibson
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Bonnie Collins 26 November 2008

This is so very very tender, I trully enjoyed the feel you have given this from your powerfull opening stanza to the exucute that says it all....... Wonderfullly done... bonnie

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Reshma Ramesh 19 September 2008

loved this one Bob.. well done..........

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 September 2008

Ammmmmazing ryhm/rythm/imagery and flow.................10

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Kim Schilling 03 May 2008

Wonderful imagery, Bob!

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Bob Gibson

Bob Gibson

Billingham County Durham
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