As i placed my foot upon the train
i looked back an saw my mothers pain
i can't go back I've come this far
i'm a sailor now! a jolly jack tar!
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Ammmmmazing ryhm/rythm/imagery and flow.................10
This is so very very tender, I trully enjoyed the feel you have given this from your powerfull opening stanza to the exucute that says it all....... Wonderfullly done... bonnie