Saturday, July 28, 2012

Don't Look Back Comments

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Strange shadows
following me as I walk alone
no one for miles
but me and my thoughts
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Dave Alan Walker
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Valsa George 22 April 2014

We have to forget the bitter and painful experiences of the past... Never let them follow us like shadows! Those who forget the past and look ahead into the future alone can prosper in life... A great write with a great message!

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Chris Blazo 19 August 2012

That's life. Things just happen. Good poem.

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Adeline Foster 10 August 2012

Well done. Thanks for commenting. There are a lot more, I am sure you may enjoy. I like you efforts. Adeline

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Kevin Patrick 05 August 2012

It is hard to let go sometimes but necessary for our growth, True to every fiber of my being

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Vinod Sharma 29 July 2012

Simple, clear, profound words. Great poem.

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Heather Wilson 29 July 2012

The last verse said it all Dave, keep walking on, there may be a rainbow further down the road.

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Dave Alan Walker

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