Sunday, July 19, 2009

Don'T Look Back. Comments

Rating: 2.8

We can't get back there.
The rusty locks on the open door
will keep us out forever,
and all we had is fading
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Viola Grey
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sanity the main event to gawk at such a non-existent door and that too tightly shut with connivance of moist love created what madness …. move on [Chris is right V your absences are felt :) ]

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Fay Slimm 19 July 2009

The phrase 'left cold and abandoned with each soft hurt' is inspired Viola - in fact the whole poem speaks loudly to the reader of lost love - but with the positive outlook brought forward by the final lines it lifts the piece to a lighter read too.... well written - - - 10 + + + from Fay.....

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