Don't Look At The Sky Comments

The ugly and dark side of life is presented in this poem. However life has its redeeming wualities as well.

Dear Shakil, you have touchingly inscribed the darkside of the life from the birth of the world to till today. Still than you have hope to improve ourselves. Your penmanship is so nice that I appreciate. Let it be quote... Don't stare at the sky Thunder roars like hungry lion Blood plummets in the form of rain World suffers out of severe pain You swivel your eyes away from sky Nothing will descend from heaven above People have to learn and comprehend The occult gimmick of the art of love. Thanks for sharing.

Very wisely penned. A wonderful use of words n images to depict a hopeless situation. Reading the history of mankind n looking around us makes us feel as if life is all suffering. But i like how you end it, we have to learn from life rather than just hoping for miracles and we have to improve things ourselves without hoping for divine intervention.10

You swivel your eyes away from sky Nothing will descend from heaven above People have to learn and comprehend The occult gimmick of the art of love Wow.. AS nice poem shared. Thanks for the sharing.