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i understand where you are coming from love it nice use of words

i friffin love it! ! ! i say that about alot of things....but this one...its on a whole other level.... it had soo much emotion n...well idk what more to say...2300++

Truly a masterpiece.....the longer you hold on it really is harder to see straigh..to keep believing...my favorite line where you said to listen to your heart oce in a while was very insightful....each beat you hear turns from a silent lifelss of pain to a new day...try to look forward...try to pray...i believe you'll love again and yes i too believe that love is something far from the obvious...people will soon see it just takes time..it takes a lesson...a person...a day. wonderful writing never stop expressing your feelings..it brings life to your work of art^^ keep living on my friend...

Oh this IS good! The emotions are very well expressed. 'A million children crying, have no crib, have no bed In my head, that’s what I hear, as my muscles begin to shake A respiratory systematic machine, and your heart begins to break.' This feels like alot of anguish perhaps like on the brink of panic. However, regardless of how grim it may all seem I hope you don't give up on love. Cause it's the little things in life that can actually brighten up our souls the most. A smile from the right person when your having a crappy day. The compassion of a stranger who holds the door open when your hands are full. Or a seemingly routine hug from the person you love. All can provoke a phenomenon some would like to call happiness. Wishing you the best day ever Izzey Strange