Friday, November 9, 2007
Don'T Let The Lights Go Out On You Comments
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At 3 a.m. the water sputters
as the loosely twisted 7 grooved
chromium knobs are turned toward
warm with my sleek swimmers
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Lisa Rhodes
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7/20/2025 12:39:51 AM # 1.0.0
The first stanza drew me in at the most basic level, but the tension built, and there was something more coming into view. The swirl of uneven images dropped your vision onto my lap, and before i knew it, you had successfully moved a fully erected house into my mind. Not sure if it's a plea for help, a warning, or a celebration of madness, but it works for me. Nice work.