Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Don'T Let Me Go Yet Comments

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i promised to take care of you
i promised you the world
but for all that i promised.
i haven't kept my word.
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nameless sorrow
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Bernard Snyder 18 July 2012

I liked this one a lot! Particularly the line 'I will learn to dance'...lol Nice flow!

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Jeffenise Robertson 18 July 2012

It's obviously on your heart to make things right, I hope she forgives you..

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