Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Don'T Let Me Go Comments

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Arms cocoon around me
Lips upon mine
I hope this feeling last
While our hearts entwine
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Brianna N R Wine
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Jazib Kamalvi 11 March 2020

Such a nice poem, Brianna N R W. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Emily Krueger 28 October 2011

I love the rhyming of this one. I could feel the emotions as I read it. Love it! !

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Emily Krueger 25 October 2011

I love the wording and the simplicity of this piece. It has the romantic side of it, which that I love while still keeping the wording simple. Love it!

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