Don't Let Go Comments

(cont.) you make this very believable, and it probably has happened, at least for the most part. maybe not a bus, but a knife or fall from window, OR train? lots of possibilities. i think death would be preferable to such a life, but some may lead a good enough life on medication(s) . to MyPoemList and to my November showcase of poems from PH poets, this month featuring poets of Indian subcontinent. Thanks bri :)

You don't exists.....use exist :) i'm 'into this poem', but not a patient, though some may suggest i should be! i like the repeating from stanza #1 to #4. in last stanza i'd use stepfather, no space. (cont.)