The rule of thumb is never quit
So if you fail, get over it
Listen to what wise men said
Don't leave your dreams asleep in bed.
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Don't leave your dreams asleep in bed. Think long and hard before you act Always be truthful with the facts Keep focused on the road ahead Don't leave your dreams asleep in bed. Great advise... you are filling the mind of the reader with determination to achieve....... very fine positive poem.. tony
A very inspiring well crafted write. Our dreams take us to heights.Never should we leave our dreams. A nice piece with great rhyme.10
When you're the boss.....asleep in bed- Liked the stanza best. Liked the poem.
Nice poem. Refrain makes the poem more beautiful, your passion is well reflected. Thanks for sharing.
Revisiting this wonderful poem that fuels one to attain his/ her dreams. A highly motivational write. So wonderfully written 10++++ and on to my Poem List.