Tuesday, October 30, 2012

` Don'T Leave Without A Kiss Comments

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Please don't leave without a kiss;
I want to plant it on your lips.
My arms around your hip;
O' my love can you feel the heat?
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Efe Benjamin
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Sara 17 November 2012

The love the rhyming scheme, and the fantasy of living in love, and wanting to grow with that person (: Good write.

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Matthias Pantaleon 05 November 2012

I love the rhyme; that's the soul of poetry...how I wish she could actually stay without having to kiss before leaving

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Efe Benjamin

Efe Benjamin

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