Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Don't Leave Me Here Comments

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Darkness shrouds my house
It has no windows or doors
There is no way back in
Everything is gone
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Chris Mackie
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Salu Salu 10 November 2008

Quite touching! ! ! vibrantl emulation of pain in the murmur. I love that utterance, I remember, Hugh Maurns too. keep writing..............rgrds/salu

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James Timothy Jarrett 04 October 2008

Very dark and moving. .

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Emancipation Planz 18 June 2008

Inspirational...... hee hee.... aroha PS tomato has been sourced.

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