Saturday, April 19, 2008

Don'T Leave, Daddy! Comments

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I sat there watching them.
I'd seen it a million times before.
It went on AM through PM.
But, this time, daddy put a suitcase by the door.
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Sophia Smith
mom
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Scott Austin 21 April 2008

Your heart felt sadness is felt in every word you have expressed in this write. May peace and joy once again fill your heart soon. Scott

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Jerry Hughes 20 April 2008

.................et tu, David?

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David Keig 20 April 2008

This poem of yours broke my heart. I am one of the fathers who have left and it so hard. Good poem. Very very well done.

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Sophia Smith

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